My first experience with college-level peer review was really helpful. Reading Abbi’s essays gave me new perspectives on how I could improve my own writing. For example, I noticed how she was very specific including personal experiences, which made her essays more engaging and relatable. which made me realize that i didn’t really give add my voice When I received feedback, that was a gerat feedback to should include my own personal experience in my essay. This suggestion helped me realize that adding more of my voice would not only strengthen my argument but also make my writing more interesting to readers. one of the challenge I faced during the peer review session was staying objective when reading my classmate work. Sometimes, I found myself comparing their writing to my own, which made it harder to focus on giving constructive feedback specific to their work. to improve this i plan on just focusing more and give feedback.